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Post by Kalumpocuis on May 13, 2010 15:51:11 GMT -8
Here ill change the character but he is still in the same location
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Post by Kalumpocuis on May 13, 2010 16:00:48 GMT -8
Name: Estabar Carvillos
Description:He is a tall profound man wearing a poncho or cloak of some sort and a wide brimed hat. He carries a walking stick passed down from generation to generation and
has a stub of a cigar sticking from his mouth. He also use a pack mule for transportation of his belongings.
Occupation: wanderer
Personality: Not much of a talker he slowly meadners the lands of the library searching for the meaning in his life. Very solitary with no family.
Backround: After learning of great corruption in his town,in which his wife and children were killed by unruly law men, he planed to assasinate the mayor and run from his former life he now wanders with his mule and everything he can carry.
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Post by Olspher on May 13, 2010 17:37:35 GMT -8
*Takes a deep breath* OK I did not imagine this would be a problem, but I suppose now it is. For all future reference the library is an interesting mix of past and future. However, DO NOT PUSH YOUR LUCK, it is most certainly MORE geared toward the past. The Explosion is fine but this description: Bái walks the street an dfinds a small bookstore after quickly reading a few books he deamed important he places a small blakc box under one of the shelves. He quickly walks away and into a nearby pub and sits down calmly as a huge explosion is heard and people rush out. (I posted Happy) is really not. If you are going to do something that is a bit ify, then take the time to pound out details (and get a spell check) to leave it beyond a doubt that you are within the confines of reason. Moving on, pmk (you should change your name to your nation by the way) I would have been fine with the gunslinger if you were not so blatantly obvious about it, but I see you changed your character anyway. Plus, all of you, we do not have to spontaneously end up in the same place all within the span of 2 or 3 posts. You should really be taking some time to do your own thing and then subtly fade in with other characters. I understand this may be your first RP of this nature, so it's fine... Now let's get this RP really going! |
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Post by Jalorn on May 13, 2010 18:14:41 GMT -8
Not much of a talker he slowly meadners the lands of the library searching for the meaning in his life. Very solitary with no family. Anyone else notice that everyone has the same background basically? |
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Post by Olspher on May 14, 2010 5:56:09 GMT -8
((I'm going to go with the whole explosion thing, but I hope Talem might find the time to put in a better description, or fill in some the blanks in his next post. Also, the 'bookstores' in the library are for rare books and I imagine them to be more like trade stations, not so much a place that one would look around for books, but again it's fine...))
Waren continued to flip through the book with the odd symbol and slowly looked over at Julius. "I have only ever encountered this symbol on books, they always sell good, and I'm always eager to get rid of them. They give me a great uneasy feeling, I always feel as if something bad is about to happen when I have them but nothing of that sort has ever really ha- a great booming could be heard from across the street and the pub shook from the shock. Waren nearly had a heart attack but very quickly regained his composure and looked again at Julius as the commotion rose to crescendo around them, raising his eyebrows slightly and then turning towards the blast to see if he might get a glimpse of what had happened, the crowd was to thick.
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Post by Jalorn on May 15, 2010 0:11:29 GMT -8
"Good God!" Julius exclaimed, though remaining perfectly calm. "I should probably investigate that later. It might somehow be connected..."
Julius gazed at the flames for a moment longer, then said, "Please... continue. Or would you prefer we postpone our discussion until our curiosities are sated?"
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Post by Z (Talem) on May 18, 2010 19:49:46 GMT -8
The Gunslinger who had just arrived in the sleepy town in which he wishes to stay and get cleaned up, matbe finding a few contracts on the way there. upon entering a mighty explosion rock the village. the gunslinger quickly runs to investigate finding several men wemon and children in the smoking wreckage of a demolished bookstore. He changes his plans with great haste to find the cause of this disaster. (do not create details of my deeds that were not precisely suggested. I may have been iffy but i was rushed and it still doesn't give you the right to rite it in your own words. It was a small explosive, while burning most of the books people would of only been severely damaged if they had been right next to the explosive. I will try to mak emost posts more detailed in the future i was rushed this time so i left out detail. I added some more detail now if anyone wishes to read it BTW if no one interacts with my character I will probably end blowing more things up ) |
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Post by Olspher on May 19, 2010 17:23:39 GMT -8
((You will have to get used to people describing your actions... It just happens, unless it's a serious misinterpretation, I suggest you just live with it. Otherwise you are justified, but another post with your actual character would be much appreciated))
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Post by Z (Talem) on May 20, 2010 15:20:19 GMT -8
((You will have to get used to people describing your actions... It just happens, unless it's a serious misinterpretation, I suggest you just live with it. Otherwise you are justified, but another post with your actual character would be much appreciated)) (It is in a way it makes it seem like i have no concern for human life and did you not read all my character has to do for awhile is blow stuff up so someone please realize the calm man in the bar probbbly has spomething to do with the big boom or its off to the next bookstore for me) |
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Post by doajda on May 21, 2010 21:13:51 GMT -8
Name: Vassili Yurchev
Class: Wanderer
Description:Prison made Vassili a very shady looking man. He around 6 foot 6 inches and wears a long black robe with the hood on. His pupils are red and his skin is pale, his teeth are jagged and sharp. He has long black hair and has a black blind fold over his eyes. He is very skinny making him look like a dark skeleton covered in flesh, and it almost seems he is surrounded by darkness despite the numerous light sources.
Personality: In his mid twenties already corrupted by greed, he is known to do anything for money. He religiously carries two poison tipped knives hidden in his sleeves. A wandering merchant in the library, he sells rare goods and other consumables and weapons. He will call you from the shadows when you enter the room with a voice in your mind to check out his wares.
Background: He came from a wealthy merchant family in the heart of Muscow. His father taught him the way of business and trade while his mother taught him how do deal with shady people and how to make shady deals. Arrested at 16, he was put in prison after selling drugs. His father paid the judge off to avoid the death penalty. After the door to the labyrinth came in Muscow, panic struck and jail was broken free. He was immediately pursued by the warden, so he went through the gate and made his escape.
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Post by doajda on May 21, 2010 21:15:35 GMT -8
What is the color of night?
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Post by Z (Talem) on May 23, 2010 14:18:45 GMT -8
(sanguine! but really man T.T)
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Post by Jalorn on May 23, 2010 17:41:37 GMT -8
((what?!))
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Post by Z (Talem) on May 23, 2010 18:45:09 GMT -8
(oblivion darkbrotherhood its the password TT)
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Post by doajda on May 24, 2010 22:37:45 GMT -8
((I'm sorry the reference probably wasn't subtle enough or unnecessary, I just really like allusions and references =( .))
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Post by Z (Talem) on May 25, 2010 16:18:06 GMT -8
(subtle you just plain said didn't even say your charecter said it and can someone plz do smoething plz)
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Post by Kalumpocuis on May 28, 2010 19:49:03 GMT -8
Estabar suddenly breaks into a strange dance from his home town with alot of flailing and kicking of legs many people look on in amazement many thinking he is having a seizure. He hopes this dance will cause the strange bomber to come to the table which he then sat in and ordered and ice tea. slowly spinning a trinket he waits for any response from the man in the corner...
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Post by Kalumpocuis on May 28, 2010 20:12:35 GMT -8
Getting no response in a timely manner he decides to go over to and talk to the strange , Erie, stupidic looking man how seemed he didnt enjoy estabar's dance of the adhders
He then asks in a voice one would use when talking to a kindergardener, "Hello sir may i sit here?"...
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Post by Z (Talem) on May 29, 2010 12:23:12 GMT -8
(im going to assume you meant me though if you read my post you would know that im not in the corner. last time i didnt put any detail this time it says im at the counter not sitting in a corner  ) |
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Post by Olspher on May 31, 2010 17:01:27 GMT -8
((All comments in (()) will hereby be deleted if I deem them unnecessary. If you have a problem with this then you always have the option to stop participating in this RP. I can see that many of you are new to this sort of RP, and although your posts annoy me a great deal I'm going to deal with it . For now on I want this attitude to be universal, if you don't like what someone said about your character, deal with it and ignore the comment in your next post, expressing your annoyance incessantly changes nothing and adds useless posts. OK, my aim is for this to be the last out of game comment for a while, try to make that a reality.
P.S. If you have any major concerns I encourage you to first speak to me or even better the person in which you are having a problem with via PM. When contacting these people please use a civil tone and aim at solving the situation rather then instigating it further.))
Waren glanced around once more at the crowd around him and then back at Julius. After scratching his beard for a bit he spoke, "I don't like this... I have no interest in whatever just happened, the only thing that will come of it is a great increase in people. With such a conclusion in my head I believe I'm eager to get out of here before doing so becomes completly impossible." With that he began to rise and looked at Julius once more "might you wish to accompany me?"
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